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Edit your book


Take your first draft, give it a health check, sand off a few rough edges, get some feedback on it, then roll it in glitter (in a good way) so it’s ready for publishing.




Outline of your book, done? Check

First draft of your book, done? Check

Now What…?

It’s time for the electrifying thirty-day business book editing challenge!

It’s the final step on your journey of writing your own bestseller before you publish and promote it!

This course helps business owners who have already planned and written their first draft and now want to give their book a thorough healthcheck, get some feedback on their material, and get their work prepped and polished for publishing, in a rapid, efficient and thorough way. 

Bish! Bash! Bosh! Final book draft done! 🙂

(Because true professionals know correcting ‘misatkes’ matters.)

Who am I?  

My name is Colette Mason, and ensure business owners create their own top-notch books based on their professional experience. (I’ve published thousands of titles in my time.)

Although the speed of my methods will make your jaw drop, the finished quality of my publications won’t.

In fact, I have a 99% five-star review rating on Amazon for ALL my authors… not bad considering you can cop a one-star review just for the delivery being a day late… which doesn’t even have anything to do with the content!)

Am I any good or worse than a Justin Bieber album on repeat?

I might look like a purple-haired rebel, but I am mercilessly professional and have accomplished some noteworthy things in the wacky world of book coaching and publishing… despite frittering time away on 24-hour stints playing on Warcraft or playing air drums to metal on Spotify…

Grown up stuff like this…

  • Published #1 BEST SELLERS 13 times on Amazon in just two years of starting up my publishing business
  • Author of my own books and getting featured in the press worldwide
  • International coach and speaker on how to fast track authority with content
  • Delivered multi-million dollar information publishing projects for blue-chip companies
  • Created a templated publishing system used for thousands of  UK Government titles

You ARE in safe hands…

Here’s a selection from hundreds of five-star Amazon reviews my business book authors have enjoyed…

Is This For You?

You ONLY need this course if you:…

  • have written the first draft of your business book (not a memoir, receipe or fiction book)
  • know that a raft of basic mistakes in your finished book annihilates your ability to be seen as an authority
  • care about the quality of your work and want to self-publish a book that is every bit as good as one of it’s traditionally published brethen

What happens when you become a published author…?

With a successful book you will have the authority you deserve in your industry*…

  • Authority #1: You will be an expert in your marketplace…
  • Authority #2: You will be a respected published author…  
  • Authority #3: You will have a reason to offer valuable follow on courses and programmes…
  • Authority #4: You will be the brains behind a signature book that gets great reader results… 
  • Authority #5: You (and your book) will be tagged in social media posts whenever potential clients need rapid help… 

* Unlike Iron Maiden’s singer Bruce Dickinson, you don’t have to qualify for a commercial pilot’s licence to prove you’re highly skilled and have hidden talents… 🙂

When Can I Expect Results..?

The editing process is broken down into distinct stages to make it easy to manage, and give you some variety as you fix the weaknesses in your first draft:

  • Developmental editing is quick to complete, a couple of days is usually enough
  • Beta-reading is around a week if you ask the right people to read your book (TIP: don’t rely on drifters and slackers who use up the 30 days not doing their bit 🙂 )
  • Copyediting and proofreading can be outsourced to an editor (for around half the price of a full edit) or you can chip away at it (over two weeks to keep your eye fresh) using some detailed checklists combined with tools like Grammarly to ensure you get things ship-shape

What Are You Getting With This Proven book planning System?

Simple, Short Actionable lessons

Four bite-sized lessons, taking around than two hours to complete, that focus on the essentials you need to do, not fecking fluff and filler. If you plan to outsource editing you can give your book a thorough healthcheck before hading it on to your editor, or follow the guided checklists and tease out and correct the mistakes yourself. 

Flexible learning

No “Death by Powerpoint” hell. Enjoy eye-catching videos, listen to the audios on the move, or read (on screen or print.). There’s a boat-floater there for you, for sure.

A FIRM DEADLINE to spur you on

It’s a thirty-day challenge-based system. Because I am feeling generous, I’ve allowed 60 days access (thirty extra days)… close enough to keep you focused… far enough away, if life chucks an unexpected curveball there’s still time. 

Unfortuntely, editing is one stage you can’t rush. The fact is it’s one of those activities that takes time. If you try and power through every lesson, your eye for detail gets trashed. That said, sixty days is plenty should you end up needing extra time.


  • A final take your on cover concept and wording

  • The confidence that any lingering silly mistakes and loose ends will have been dealt with well before your book is unleashed on the general public

  • An opportunity to check your explanation flows well and is consistent in tone, and clear concise and logical in its approach
  • The exact same detailed checklists I use to make sure all the books I publish for my authors are error free.

  • A simple system to get constructive feedback from beta-readers to make sure your draft book hits the spot with your audience so you never risk your professional reputation with a shoddy book.

  • An opportunity to improve your final draft based on helpful suggestions from your beta-readers to boost the quality of your finished book even further

  • Learn how to copyedit and proofread the right way (plus a series of short and sweet checklists to make sure you don’t forget anything) even if your English ‘ain’t great’

Let me show you some proof…

(You’re supposed to add this to sales pages…etc etc…. but if you need this much convincing to invest a few quid to become a published author, then this isn’t for you…) 

I never believed I could write a book. I hated writing all my adult life.

I was Colette’s guinea pig when she first started her publishing business. I laughed when she said I had the ability to write a book. And yet, she was right.

What’s more, thanks to her encourgement,  I have written six books now! I am truly staggered – and a little grateful! Being an author has brought me lots of exciting opportunities.

Jane Akshar

Owner, Flats In Luxor

I knew what I wanted to tell people. I just didn’t know how to make it into a book.

I started a chicken keeping business and wanted to share my expertise with people, so they had as much fun keeping chickens as I did.

I kept explaining the same thing over and over, and it was a relief to get all that knowledge in a practical book my customers could refer to. I knew they would look after their hens well.

Mark Burrows

Owner, Redlynch Farm

I made a start on my own but I ended up wasting endless hours researching.

As a professional athelete and former Team GB Paralympian, I wanted to make sure my wheelchair fitness book made the grade in terms of quality.

I tried to sort everything on my own, but it was so time-consuming my book project. stalled. I’m so glad I asked for Colette’s help. Everything was so much simpler and quicker. 

Dan Highcock

Professional wheelchair basketball player

What’s the guarantee?

Take the course.

Spend one hour or so going through it and if you don’t think you can write your book outline…

…then I’ll give you entire money back. No questions asked.

You have 60 days to take the course and any time during that you can request a full refund and I’ll happily do that. (I can still fund my gadget habit without resorting to ripping off a good citizen like you…)


What’s the guarantee?

 Take the course.

Spend one hour or so going through it and if you don’t think you can write your book outline…

…then I’ll give you entire money back. No questions asked.

You have 60 days to take the course and any time during that you can request a full refund and I’ll happily do that. I can still fund my gadget habit without resorting to ripping someone like you off…


 It ain’t for you, sweet cheeks, if…

  • You want to write a recipe book, memoir or fiction
    (Find other courses out there, this one’s not that)
  • You buy stuff to ‘cheer yourself up’ and feel good but never do anything
    (You need counselling, not a course)
  • You like to leave everything to the last minute
    (You need lessons in discipline. This type of carry on will bring out my inner Gordon Ramsay)
  • You ignore instructions cos you ‘know it all’
    (It won’t work with uncoachable people)
  • You want to miss out important stuff deliberately to flog it later 
    (Readers will hate you, not wave their wallets with glee at your ‘upsell opportunity’)
  • You think lacklustre ‘ego trip’ books made up randm stuff on your hard disk are ‘ok’ 
    (If it ain’t about the reader no one’s buyin’)
  • You think lacklustre ‘ego trip’ books made up randm stuff on your hard disk are ‘ok’ 
    (If it ain’t about the reader no one’s buyin’)


I’m serious – please don’t apply if you tick any of these boxes above. The deal’s off.  It simply won’t work. You’ll whine about a refund. I’ll be annoyed you didn’t check it’s right for you despite this big warning box. (Could I be any more up front?)

I want us both to have fun, not a literary nightmare.

How Easy Is It To Edit Your Book?

Pretty easy if you ask me.

All you need to do is click on the “Add to bucket” button on this page

And once you have paid (I mean invested…) you’ll get complete access to everything I’ve been talking about.

Yes! I am fed up of wasting time WITH MY BOOK! Let’s get going, Colette!

Please join me. The price oops… I mean “investment”

(Gotta obey those copywriting rules, eh!)


The crossroads

You’ve come a long way…

You’ve mapped out your book (…which took you 5 days tops…)

You wrote out the entire draft of your book (…which took you thirty-days if you were on the writing challenge…)

The only thing left for you now is to make sure you edit it in the best way possible.

Start now. Get the electrifying thirty-day book editing challenge edit TODAY!


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